The Girl with Vermillion Hair
By QLB4 copyright 2013
Peter told me about
The girl with the most beautiful
Vermillion hair
Who hid it
Denied it
And would not dress to celebrate it
Because it came from her father
Whom she did not like
And yet it was a beautiful part of her
That stayed denied
And so
No doubt
She cried
That is brilliant! If you hadn’t credited yourself to that I would have thought that was by some famous poet. Really really good.
Wow. Thank you! Peter did tell me about her but the poem-isation is my own. Cheers.
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Can I reblog this one?
Yes of course, thanks
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Reblogged this on thehouseofbailey and commented:
I wanted to show this one to all. It’s by a close friend of mine who like me writes mainly as an outlet and for personal reason. For me though this one stands out as something exceptional and I thought it deserved a wider audience.
Somebody commented on your poem via my reblog
http://thehouseofbailey.wordpress.com/2013/07/29/the-girl-with-vermillion-hair/